Study Aboard
You are planning to study aboard. what do you think you will like and dislike about this experience ? why? use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Study in aboard means you have to plain all things. This planning must start before 1 or 2 years before so that you have perfect plain to get the admission in the aboard. First of all you have plain from the which entrance you have give for admission to up which documents and financial aids will require. When I make my mind to plain all this things then I feel some thing are very boring and time consuming which I don't like while other are more interesting .
Taking the entrance test will give me good experience. For that purpose I have prepare all basic things such as entrance for MS in aboard you have to give GRE and Tofel which clear your basic concept ,improve your English. Increase your confident level. That experience I like to feel. At time of preparation I will get lot of knowledge about that country . Which will help me in future when I am in aboard for study. One more thing I will like to experience that talk with aboard universities advisors to get more information about the colleges. This experience will give me more and accurate information about the universities like status, rank of university, requirements of universities, about courses information. Also I like to experience the air travel because I will get a chance to see the other county and experience the how the time zone is change. All this things I really like to do and experience.
However, some things that I don't want to do , are very time consuming like collection of all documents. Such as your college and university transcript ,recommendation letters which are very time consuming and somewhat expensive in some universities. You have given more time to collect this documents instead of concentration in study. Next thing is that arrangement of financial aids which also difficult task for middle class family. All this experience I don't like because They lose my concentration from my study.
Ultimately ,If I want admission I have to do all things which Like and don't like .
Study in aboard means you have to plain all things.
Study in aboard means you have to plan all things.
Sentence: First of all you have plain from the which entrance you have give for admission to up which documents and financial aids will require.
Description: The word plain is not usually used as an adverb
Suggestion: Refer to plain , did you mean plan?
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a WH-determiner
Suggestion: Refer to the and which
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and give
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and up
Sentence: When I make my mind to plain all this things then I feel some thing are very boring and time consuming which I don't like while other are more interesting .
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and things
Sentence: For that purpose I have prepare all basic things such as entrance for MS in aboard you have to give GRE and Tofel which clear your basic concept ,improve your English.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and prepare
Sentence: Also I like to experience the air travel because I will get a chance to see the other county and experience the how the time zone is change.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a WH-adverb
Suggestion: Refer to the and how
Sentence: All this things I really like to do and experience.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and things
Sentence: You have given more time to collect this documents instead of concentration in study.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and documents
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 347 350
No. of Characters: 1600 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.316 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.611 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.663 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.35 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.611 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.376 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.514 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.18 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5