Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading passage.

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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading passage.

The article states that zoos are essential to a modern culture that places value in animal life and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that, animal rights is concern issue in zoos and the professor debate argument with the passage in meaningful way and refutes each of the authorُs reasons.

First, the reading claims that animal are treated very well in zoos. The professor refutes this point by saying that animal don’t treated very well in zoos. He states that the animals don’t care as the author would have believe. He states that two red pandas in the zoos dead after expose to rat poison and they don’t find their dead body. Also, he states that this case is one of many lack of care in the zoos.

Second, the article states that zoos are no longer seen as or marked as forms of entertainment but as education. The professor contends this point by saying that zoos are entertainment no educational. He states that most of the visitors not learn about animal and zoos administrator use of animal and zoos for own purpose. Visitors don’t understand and appreciate the animal and they can’t learn new things about the animals.

Third, the reading avers that zoos serve the vital function of helping to protect and preserve endangered species. The professor opposes this point. He claims that some species are endangered in zoos. He mentioned that interbreeding in animals that are from one family cause birth defect. Consequently, the lectures talks about zoos that zoos don’t have a distinct advantage by saving endangered species.

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animal rights is concern issue in zoos and the professor debate argument with the passage
animal rights is a concern issue in zoos and the professor debates argument with the passage

the author would have believe.
the author would have believed.

flaws:
More sentence varieties wanted. A lot of 'he states'

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Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 12
No. of Words: 270 250
No. of Characters: 1273 1200
No. of Different Words: 130 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.054 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.715 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.408 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 5.84 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.562 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.207 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4