summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories discussed in the reading passage
what is exactly Cahco Canyo?
The given reading passage providing the three theories related to the "Chaco Canyo" in New Mexico in the America. However all these theories are denied by professor by providing the specific reasons to that theories. Let see one by one them.
The first theory is that the Chaco Canyo used for native place for 100 hundred families because the house architecture just like the apartment buildings at Taos ,New Mexico,which used by the many people for living purpose. As it only outer side views .If we see inside view the Chaco Canyo then it provide the sufficient proof for it. As if Chaco Canyo was native place then there were must the fire place for 100 families. But that Chaco Canyo contained only 10 fire place how it is possible to cooked for 100 families by using only 10 fire place. So this is not articulate theory to support that Chaco Canyo is native place for 100 families.
The second one is that, the Chaco Canyo used for storage purpose. It was used by the on of the supplier for storage of the garin maize which the major crop in t New Mexico people. This conclusion has to appears because of the large storage rooms were present in the Chaco Canyo. It really true that the Chaco Canyo had large storage rooms but it give the evidence that it was used by supplier for maize storage. In excavation no such evidences found such like big container for storage of maize. We can't storage that maize on floor. So theory is also discard by the professor because meaningless evidences.
The last reason is that the Chaco Canyo was used by the people for celebration of party because in excavation they found the Pueblo Alto and some pots. But the professor said that it can be of the worker who were on the site. It must used that for making the food and kept it behind after the work done. As all theories not have strong proof to make them true.
Sentence: As it only outer side views .If we see inside view the Chaco Canyo then it provide the sufficient proof for it.
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Sentence: As if Chaco Canyo was native place then there were must the fire place for 100 families.
Description: The fragment there were must the fire is rare
Sentence: But that Chaco Canyo contained only 10 fire place how it is possible to cooked for 100 families by using only 10 fire place.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and cooked
Sentence: It was used by the on of the supplier for storage of the garin maize which the major crop in t New Mexico people.
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Suggestion: Refer to the and on
Sentence: It really true that the Chaco Canyo had large storage rooms but it give the evidence that it was used by supplier for maize storage.
Description: The fragment it give the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: But the professor said that it can be of the worker who were on the site.
Description: The fragment the worker who is not usually followed by were
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace were with was
Sentence: It must used that for making the food and kept it behind after the work done.
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Suggestion: Refer to must and used
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Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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