TOEFL - INDEPENDENT WRITING TASK:
Always telling truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
In my view, the primary requisite to build a good relation is truthfulness. There are, however, many other factors into consideration like loyalty, understanding, affections and so on. My opinion is based on pragmatic reasons.
It is well known that honesty, truthfulness and loyalty co-exist and they go hand in hand with trust. A person is not trust worthy if he/she fails to display this basic dignity. Relationship's are inter-dependent on the values and choices we make. One can either choose to be honest and build the relation or choose not to bother about it and break it. So, it is purel...
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