"when people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success."Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?

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"when people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success."Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?

Everyone wants to succeed and prosper in his life, and it is part of human’s nature. It appears to me that success often requires a combination of hard work and good luck, but of the two, hard work is more important. I think this way for two main reasons. First, hard work is a substantial factor in order to achieve something. Second, luck’s effect is not negligible. For these two reasons, I feel hard work along with luck can lead an individual to success.

To begin with, hard work is the major element that helps a person to realize his dreams. It is indisputable that a hard-working perso...

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