Which one person from history would you like to meet? Give specific reasons for your choice.

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Which one person from history would you like to meet? Give specific reasons for your choice.

In the history of the humankind, There are many characters that changed the direction of the history by acting and thinking different. At first glance it seems difficult for me to choose someone since there are many significant persons who shapes our lives in the world but if I had the chance I would like to meet Mustafa Kemal Atatürk. My arguments for this point listed as follows.

One of the primary reason for my propensity is that Mustafa Kemal Atatürk is the greatest person in our history. To me one of the most important features of a significant person is to stand tall to the difficul...

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Sentence: We had no regular army, Citizens were fighting for our indepence as they have no military knowledge and experience.
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Sentence: He knew that one of the primary requirements for a country to become contemprary is to get rid of the Sharia and following year, He established the republic of turkey though there were many resistance to him.
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Sentence: Last but not least, He was very foreseeing person, As a saying goes from 'Our great ideal is to raise our nation to highest standars of civilization and prosperity '
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Sentence: After establising the republic of Turkey, He implemented many revolutions such as alphapet reform, clothing reform and contemprary education revoulutions.
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