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Why are people living longer ?
There have appeared endless discussions over the reason for people’s long life. Many people are trying to figure out different causes. The purpose of my writing is to thoroughly look into the typical ones.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is health care. It cannot be denied that the modern and abundance of health care center boosts people’s health. With higher living standard, people more and more take care about their health. That is the main reason for the appearance of many medical centers and convenient health care service. Therefore, people always are guaranteed abou...
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No. of Words: 532 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.387 7.5
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Score: 5.5 out of 6 (or 27 in 30)
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 35 15
No. of Words: 532 350
No. of Characters: 2747 1500
No. of Different Words: 265 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.803 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.164 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.768 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 214 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 147 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.387 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.371 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.412 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.058 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5