Why do people go to university or college.Give reasons and examples to support your reasons

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Why do people go to university or college.Give reasons and examples to support your reasons

People might have different reasons for going university or college.some people go to university or college for getting new friends, some go for getting knowledge and skills and others go for experience.Personally, I think that people go to university or college for gaining new knowledge and skills, for developing their carriers and for gaining experience in their desired field.

To begin with, I think that people go to university or college for having some new knowledge and skills to fulfill their knowledge thirst.People want to know much knowledge and skills for their better life.Because, when they know lots of things they have better chance of becoming alert about the current updates of information and getting chances of more reliable jobs in their life

In addition to having new knowledge and skills, people go to university or college to developing their better future life.Nowadays, people have to face tough competition for getting any kind of job.So they have to develop themselves for that competitive environment.Also there have been identified some areas as a charming scope for job such as IT and medical field so that people have to develop themselves as the demand of the job market and have to develop them accordingly.As a personal example, I found the nursing carrier as a better scope area and selected it as my goal to achieve and finally became a nurse.

Finally, in combination with having new knowledge and experience; development of better carrier, people go to university or college to gain the most useful experience for their future life.Even though having knowledge and skills from the university or college, to become more confidence on the subject matter students have to gain some experience in their respective areas and have to develop fluency and get expertise on it.By way of example, my friend Sunjaya went ITuniversity after completing his graduation and serve for about 3 years to make experience and for getting enter in the highly competitive university,finally in the fourth year he entered the desired university.Now he has become a renouned professor of that university as a computer professor.

Considering the reasons I explored in the above three paragraph, I would have to say that people go to university or college to get some new knowledge and skills; to develop their carrier for better life and to achieve some experience in their interested field.

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