You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy?
If I would have enough money to buy a house or a business I would buy a house. A business may succeed or fail and It's possible for me to change my mind about what I want to do in business.
However, having a home would be a lifetime gift to myself. Right now I live in an apartment, with barely enough room for everything. All my furniture and all the things that I've accumulated since I've left college, barely fit. I have almost no space left in my closet. ThIs means that my clothes are always wrinkled because they are crushed together. I have no room for my cleaning supplies nor for more...
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Sentence: I new house means more room for all this things.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to I and new
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and things
Sentence: On the windowsill of my apartment I put out bird seeds every morning.
Error: windowsill Suggestion: windows
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
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