young people enjoy life more than that older people do

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young people enjoy life more than that older people do

I agree on this point that," Young people enjoy life more than older people do". Everybody has a right to enjoy their life in their own ways however this is not possible for some older people because of some reasons. Let see these reasons.

The first reason is that, most of the older people are not physically fit. They have some minor or major problem with their health. Somebody have problems in their bone, somebody have heart problems. So if older people want to enjoy thier life then they can't do it eagarly as they want. Some limitation are come forward to make them nervous or unhappy. For example my father-in-law likes sweet very much but he can't eat it. He can't enjoy beacause he is the patient of the diabetic. He not get a single chance to enjoy the sweet food beacuse of health problem.

The second reason is that,Some old people devote their whole life to make their children life. So at the end they don't have that much of money to enjoy the life. For example many younger people keep their older parents in to older age house as they feel they are now useless. These type of older people don't have any moeny to enjoy the life. In reality they don't want to enjoy because they are thrown by their own children. So they not willing to enjoy the life.

Moreover somebody have lot of money and they are physically fit to enjoy the life but they can't do that thing because nobody is ready to spend their own time with older people.So older people feel lonely. Their chlidren not able to give time to their older parents because they are so busy in their own life.

So,these types of problems generally not fetch by young people because they are young. They are Physically fit, have lucrative job and also life patner to enjoy their life. So finally we have to comeforward to understand our older people feeling and try to over come it.

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Sentence: So if older people want to enjoy thier life then they can't do it eagarly as they want.
Error: eagarly Suggestion: eagerly
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Sentence: He can't enjoy beacause he is the patient of the diabetic.
Error: beacause Suggestion: because

Sentence: He not get a single chance to enjoy the sweet food beacuse of health problem.
Error: beacuse Suggestion: because

Sentence: These type of older people don't have any moeny to enjoy the life.
Error: moeny Suggestion: money

Sentence: Their chlidren not able to give time to their older parents because they are so busy in their own life.
Error: chlidren Suggestion: children

Sentence: They are Physically fit, have lucrative job and also life patner to enjoy their life.
Error: patner Suggestion: patter

Sentence: So finally we have to comeforward to understand our older people feeling and try to over come it.
Error: comeforward Suggestion: come forward

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