1. Remove 'ehn' in the speaking.
2. Don't need those transition word like: 'In my opinion...' . High marks = fluency + good content + more content. So try to remove all extra works not so important to the content.
3. The reason one is too short. Try this pattern for Q1-Q2:
first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 5 seconds
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1. Remove 'ehn' in the speaking.
2. Don't need those transition word like: 'In my opinion...' . High marks = fluency + good content + more content. So try to remove all extra works not so important to the content.
3. The reason one is too short. Try this pattern for Q1-Q2:
first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 5 seconds
First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + advantages of reason 1( 1-2 sentence). // about 20 seconds
Second, reason 2 (1 sentence) + why reason 2 (some arguments. 1-2 sentence) + advantages of reason 2 ( 1-2 sentence). // about 20 seconds
look, for every reason, it should have at least three sentences.