The introduction is too long. It should be shorter:
The professor talks about comfort zone bias which is when people prefer to remain in comfortable, familiar situations, rather than entering into new, unfamiliar ones.
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Need more content to explain why: when a film reviewer’s position opened up, he turned it down.
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Try this pattern for Q4:
Introduction. something like 'The professor is talking about....'. about two sentences in 10 seconds
Sub topic 1, blabla... about 20-25 seconds
Sub topic 2, blabla... about 20-25 seconds
21 in 30
The introduction is too long. It should be shorter:
The professor talks about comfort zone bias which is when people prefer to remain in comfortable, familiar situations, rather than entering into new, unfamiliar ones.
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Need more content to explain why: when a film reviewer’s position opened up, he turned it down.
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Try this pattern for Q4:
Introduction. something like 'The professor is talking about....'. about two sentences in 10 seconds
Sub topic 1, blabla... about 20-25 seconds
Sub topic 2, blabla... about 20-25 seconds