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My name is Altan-Od Battsengel, and I am applying for the course MA Advertising and Marketing at the University of Leeds.
I always knew I had something special in a sense that I could see and think differently. I started writing poems when I was in elementary school which eventually interconnected with my enthusiasm in music and one day I found myself composing lyrics. In fact, over 10 of my writings came to life. That was the start of my creative writing.
As a firm believer of talent being nothing without focused learning, I made ideal choice to pursue Journalism at the premie...
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Thank you very much. Is it
Thank you very much. Is it okay to send for the university application or i need to improve it?
It is great. You can send it
It is great. You can send it for sure.
is I have been enthusiastic
is that I have been enthusiastic
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 721 350
No. of Characters: 3509 1500
No. of Different Words: 369 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.867 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.985 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 256 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 205 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 143 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 104 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.033 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.432 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 9 5