Some people say there should be only one official international language Others say that it is bad Discuss both views and give you own opinion

Essay topics:

Some people say there should be only one official international language. Others say that it is bad. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

It is argued that one official language for all human beings should be applied. While a number of people believe that this can do more harm than good, I think it is better to have an official language.
On the one hand, language is one of the most essential factors of cultural identifiers. There is no doubt that language reflects the identity of a country or community, thus if only one language is offered worldwide, culture will disappear in not distant future. Moreover, when learning another language at a very young age, children tend to lose their mother tongue, as a result, they will not inherit traditional quintessence from their ancestors as usual.
On the other hand, creating one official language brings a number of advantages to social life. Firstly, if a language is common globally, there is no barrier to communication as people from all walks of life can directly talk with others without fear of misunderstanding. Secondly, knowing others’ language helps us become more empathetic. Consequently, racism and other forms of discrimination can be eradicated. Thirdly, mutual understanding are playing a crucial part in reducing tension among countries in terms of diplomatic crises. An epitomic for this fact is that in the Middle East, if people especially their authorities can understand others’ language, there will be less destructive wars and citizens will no more suffer from hunger and death. Finally, an official international language absolutely promotes global trade, business, and so that there will witness a dramatic development in economy.
In conclusion, a common language across the globe is beneficial to everyone. At the same time, every individual should give respect to their tradition and culture and try to retain them.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25795053004 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96032103083 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1804113807 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229920924272 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836705388946 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543466916114 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134790825161 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428491549512 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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