TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
The complexity of the modern life is indisputable. However, there is a controversy between two view points in planning and organizing in such a complicated situation. Although some people may think that planning in this situation is impossible since nothing is definite, I am proponent to plan even in an uncertain environment. Hence, it would be essential for youths to learn the ability of planning and organizing. They will be more successful, relaxed and motivated while they have the potential to manage their life tasks. The reasons are well illustrated as follows.
As a threshold matter, young people planning for their life are more successful than others since they have thought about their goals in advance. Determining appropriate paths, those youth can wisely guarantee their future prosperity. Nevertheless, juveniles without any specific plan or defined organization will never face a promising future. For example, my brother had had a great interest in mechanical engineering since he was very young. He achieved his goal by making a right plan which linked him to his successful future.
Moreover, proposing a plan and designing standards to achieve the plans, leads to feel calmer and less stressed. They are not worried of any obstacle confronting in their way as everything has been evaluated before. For instance, a teenager who has decided his way in engineering and established a protocol to accomplish his goals feels less distressed than the one without any defined routine to reach his goal.
Last but not least, planning and organizing bring about high impetus in youths. They are more fruitful whenever juveniles feel disappointed or exhausted. Imagining their preferred future, they will try harder and put much more efforts on their tasks to obtain the situation they always dream for. Without an organized plan, the young people may give off their attention and endeavor while following their ways in daily life.
In succinct, contemporary life aspects requires some potentials in life; especially, for the young generations. The ability to plan and organize in life is pretty momentous for youngsters since it provides them with success, ease and incentive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youth' or 'those youths'?
Suggestion: this youth; those youths
...advance. Determining appropriate paths, those youth can wisely guarantee their future prosp...
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Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...omising future. For example, my brother had had a great interest in mechanical engineer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3132183908 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85614693375 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60632183908 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2920316786 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.45 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235185088272 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741281983286 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630442803484 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140237003212 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652694189633 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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