The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
More and more people use online shopping nowaday. While there are some aguments in favour of customer that the extention of online market will supersede all shops or restaurants. I agree with the view that although this expansion is trend of this centuary but it can not replace others method of consumsion.
It is true that online shopping is increasing with numerous of advantages. Therefore economics always change so no consumsion tendency is absolute. Online market still full of weaknesses such as less verify quality, imitations, uncheck goods. And unall goods can trade such as land and airplain. To reduce this drawback, offline shopping is still better choice.
Moreover, Lazy in work become trend in few years ago but nowaday, people tend to exercise more. And shopping is one of great solution. Instead of surfing the internet with many choices, you can walk through shops on shopping center. On shop you can touch in goods and test quality of products instead of stick your eyes in pictures or describe.
Market tendency always changes. It depends on needs of each customer. Perhaps this century online market can have advantage and more and more expansive but we can predict demand of people in the future. Now social needs to to relax and save time for shopping but future maybe they will think that shopping time in shops or malls is relaxation time. They can exercise, spend time with close friend with same buying favorites or it’s just like the way you restore your energy or kill time.
In conclusion, we can not deny all advantages of online shopping. However I believe that the real shops are essential, principle and we can not change it due to any reasons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94405594406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43568802705 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3468212192 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4210526316 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211090138525 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664370362482 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557958719905 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12387087301 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030146688303 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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