With the rise in popularity of the internet newspapers will soon become a thing of the past To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The dawn of the internet and media has cast a shadow over the newspapers industry in recent
years, hence lead to a significant decline in readership worldwide. Due to this upheaval,many people
believe that newspapers will likely to become an outdated source of information in the long run.
However, from my standpoint. I assert that the belief stated above is somehow false, since the
newspapers can offer many privileges and distinguished features that cannot possibly be found on
digital flatforms, which makes many people around the world still stick to printed newspapers.

First and foremost, pieces of news nowadays are mainly being transmitted in the form of pictures,
videos, recordings, etc.,..Although seeing and hearing are two of the most effective mediums, it is
reading that can augment our knowledge to the fullest and create a better impact. In other words, it
is safe to say that we tend to be more well-informed and have a better chance of remembering
information when we read newspapers in print, as opposed to reading news off screens.

Likewise, it has been proven that newspapers have the ability to provide readers with a sensation
of sastisfaction and serendipity when they stumble across a well-written article, which will kindle a
spark of excitement and amenity in them. Moreover, unlike printed newspapers, online newspapers
usually contains a lot of advertisements, shocking headlines or eye-catching layouts, which may
deter people from focusing on what they are supposed to be looking for in the first place, making them
miss out some valuable information.

Last but not least, although online source of information share innumerable conveniences, there is
still a section of population still subscribes and reads printed newspapers everyday, for it has
become an unchangeable ritual habit for them. Not to mention, there are still many people
throughout the wolrd whose income can not cover all the daily expenses, let alone a modern device.
So newspapers can still be deemed as the most compatible option to obtain information.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'newspapers'' or 'newspaper's'?
Suggestion: newspapers'; newspaper's
...et and media has cast a shadow over the newspapers industry in recent years, hence lead t...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...adership worldwide. Due to this upheaval,many people believe that newspapers will li...
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Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...m of pictures, videos, recordings, etc.,..Although seeing and hearing are two of ...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... of pictures, videos, recordings, etc.,..Although seeing and hearing are two of t...
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Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...f pictures, videos, recordings, etc.,..Although seeing and hearing are two of the most ...
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Line 22, column 77, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...subscribes and reads printed newspapers everyday, for it has become an unchangeable rit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, in other words, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40853658537 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00784098259 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618902439024 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8599442154 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.272727273 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8181818182 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102745777552 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391012706457 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328897268884 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0278764101993 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349741351084 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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