Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Give reasons to support your answer.
Since the dawn of the humanity, interaction with people has always been thought to be an essential part of everyone’s life. Had people realized the significance and advantages of spending time with friends, they would have deliberated on it much more meticulously. Nowadays, a majority of people concur that humans are social creature and without live with others, their lives will be boring, on the contrary to this popular view, there are those who subscribe to the idea that people can focus on their life when they live alone. In my opinion, spending time with friends significantly outweighs those of live alone. I incline to social person for some reasons, three of which-that is- primarily, air your view toward life, improve social skills, and increase enjoyment of life, are among the most conspicuous ones.
A subtle explanation to why I prefer to spend most of my time with my friends, rests on the fact that every person in his or her life encounters a lot of back breaking problems which may seem impossible to solve, and person may depress and find his or her life boring. In this situation, friends can be helpful. They can recommend many simple solutions which a single person never think about them. Besides, putting the discussion in a further context, the second reason why I opt it is that every person meets many people in his or her life and needs to learn to interact with them effectively. He should know the decent manner when to talk with people. Friends are best people to remind your incorrect habit when interact with them. The last but not the least, friends make life enjoyable when you feel down. Hanging out with friends at weekend, talk with each other, eat food at restaurant, to name but a handful, makes life fruitful rather than being alone and feels bored.
Having touched on the idea that aspect, I tend to discuss it from another perspective as well. Some people believe that being alone is better in many aspects. For instance, people can focus on their work and feel independent. Also, there are a lot of friends who do not help you. They want to see your failure. This may be true to some extent; however, the fact that if people choose right person as a friend, it will helpful as I discuss before.
Considering the aforementioned arguments and discussions, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that it is not rational being alone. In today’s hectic and chaotic life, you need people in which they can improve your quality of life in many aspects and learn new things which you can use in your daily life. In this regard, a renowned Persian proverb states, “Friends are gold”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...however, the fact that if people choose right person as a friend, it will helpful as ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, mind you, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80962800875 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5521597397 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5295404814 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.770623149 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34211580097 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969384629501 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630729690211 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201149919435 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632631800075 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
and increase enjoyment of life
and increase enjoyments of life
and increase the enjoyment of life
humans are social creature and without live with others...
humans are social creatures and without living with others...
a single person never think about them
a single person never thinks about them
when interact with them.
when interacting with them.
when we interact with them.
Having touched on the idea that aspect,
Having touched on the ideas that aspect,
it will helpful as I discuss before.
it will be helpful as I discussed before.
you need people in which they can improve your quality of life
you need people whom they can improve your quality of life
1. there is a pattern behind, the examiners may figure it out.
2. need to polish sentences. most of sentences start with pronouns like: 'I, you, we....'.
I like the read car //good
The read car is my favorite //better
The read car strikes my heart. //best
read TOEFL essays by this user:
3. No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2 //still have grammatical issues
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 457 350
No. of Characters: 2107 1500
No. of Different Words: 237 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.624 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.611 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.353 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.773 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.358 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.447 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.138 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5