Nowadays, technology is everywhere. Has technology made people’s lives better or worse?
Concerning the issue of technology, people hold different views. An army of people considers that technology made people’s lives better while others claim worse. This essay will discuss both views from multi aspects.
First of all, I would like to mention the advantages of technology. It is seen that technology has changed our medicine. One example of that is the Corona Virus pandemic. Based on the most advanced technology available today, several countries such as the United State and Russia have found vaccines in the testing phase. Besides technology has brought the internet to us. This helps us make it easy to stay in touch with friends, family, and work remotely, even when you're somewhere else in the world. You can communicate verbally, video, audio, and exchange other media. Users can be regularly updated with news about local events and social developments on the internet easily.
Nonetheless, it is undeniable that the disadvantages of technology need pondering. It is believed that using too much technology equipment and computers can lead to some health problems. For example, we can suffer from various diseases such as the degenerative spine, vision damage, insomnia, inactivity, and addiction. Additionally, we would not have time to chat and take care of relatives and friends. That leads to a gradual loss of relationships.
In conclusion, for all reasons mentioned above, it can be affirmed that technology is very important in society today. By contrast, we should use technology reasonably to avoid damaging our health and relationships.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-11-04 | Việt Anh Đỗ | 60 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...s, family, and work remotely, even when youre somewhere else in the world. You can co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, nonetheless, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32931726908 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88327682847 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686746987952 0.524837075471 131% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3207224425 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7222222222 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252267845461 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723271502085 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993888651382 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153380058359 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773586920041 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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