Essay topics:
A reason why you are attending this school.
My mom was a person who wants me to study abroad. She asked me if I want to study abroad when I was in grade 9. Then she let me think for a year. After considered a lot of things, I said yes. I knew that this will be a big chance for me to improve my education. First, my mom gave me a catalogue of school for me to choose the school that I like. So, I chose this one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hool that I like. So, I chose this one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 52.1666666667 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 290.0 1977.66487455 15% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 81.0 407.700716846 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.58024691358 4.8611393121 74% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.0 4.48103885553 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03670030887 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 212.727598566 24% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 94.5 618.680645161 15% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9048758256 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 41.4285714286 100.406767564 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5714285714 20.6045352989 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854451363869 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424271904805 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512402056652 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854451363869 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 1.2 11.7677419355 10% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 94.15 58.1214874552 162% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.9 10.1575268817 29% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 2.3 10.9000537634 21% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.55 8.01818996416 69% => OK
difficult_words: 7.0 86.8835125448 8% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 3.0 10.247311828 29% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.4 Out of 6.0
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