Last month you entered a competition and won the first prize which was a visit to a city of your choice for a weekend You have now returned and decide to write a letter to a friend about the visit

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Last month you entered a competition and won the first prize, which was a visit to a city of your choice for a weekend. You have now returned, and decide to write a letter to a friend about the visit.

Dear Jessica,

How’re you doing ? Hopefully things are fine. I’m doing well here. I’m writing to you is to share with you about my summer breaks.

During my summer breaks, I’ve entered a swimming competition and I won the first price! I’m getting chance to visit to a city of my own choice and I’m over the moon about it.

The first city that came to my mind is Japan because there have many fantastic destination to visit and a lot of events I can attend. For examples, there have many types of festivals like firework festival, so I decided to visit there.

I was very lucky th...

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Score: 5.5 out of 6
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