Why Do You Come To Pare To Learn English?
English is the most important language in the world. Many people aware about the importance of English and they decide to learn it. Pare is one of the chosen places to learn English. Nowadays, Pare has been improving quickly. People come there not only for studying English, but also for studying any other languages. There are about 160 courses here. Many people, who have come to Pare, become good in English speaking with the excellent fluency. That is why I am interested in studying English here. I want to prove what people have gotten from Pare. There are three main problems that I face in practicing English language-vocabularies, speaking and grammar. I believe that in Pare I can solve all my problems.
The problem that I concern about is the lack of vocabularies. I have problem in memorizing words and easily forget about them. This happen because I do not practice English a lot. I decided to go to Pare because I heard about the intensive program that can make me focus on memorizing English vocabularies. In Pare, I have to memorize new words and new sentences every morning. This will help me to enrich my vocabularies knowledge.
Speaking is one of the problems that makes me hard to interact with foreigners. Therefore, speaking is the important skill to have. So that, the communication with others always been kept. By speaking, I can keep in touch with other people around the world. Here in Pare, I have to speak English in front of the other students loudly. The purpose of this speaking program is to increase the student’s confidence and to make them getting used to speak up their mind. The tutor will correct me if I get wrong in pronunciations and they will tell me the right ones.
My other problem is in sentences arrangement. Grammar is one the program that I need for improving my English skill. I think, without well-arranged sentences, foreigners may not understand my English. One of program available in Pare is grammar. Here, we can meet qualified teachers who can teach us about grammar. I hope I can get better skill in English.
There are three main of problems that I face in English skill and cause me to choose Pare as a place to learn English.
Sentence: This happen because I do not practice English a lot.
Description: The fragment This happen because is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace happen with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: This will help me to enrich my vocabularies knowledge.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to vocabularies and knowledge
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.355 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.576 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1759 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.593 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.657 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.355 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.576 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.161 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.46 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5