To answer the increased demand for artisan coffee Apex Corporation is releasing a new line of coffee Gourmet Select Apex Corporation will first introduce the coffee into major supermarkets where it hopes word of mouth advertising will sustain sales After

The prompt shows the plan and the strategy of the Apex corporation to introduce new coffee "Gourmet Select", In today's world most of people consume beverages like coffee and tea, these beverages become part of our day to day lives.
Most of the restaurant servers these all the time from early morning till midnight. we have some shops dedicated to only beverages.The prompt give some of the strategies from the apex corporation to make/launch the new coffee line successfully to the market. we should consider few points before making the final decision that the given strategy works.

First of all, Market team should know what is the demand for the coffee ? is it just seasonal or during all the time ? what is the current population of the particular city or town they are releasing. does most of the people drink coffee only ? the prompt fails to provide the exact statistics to make correct decision regarding this.

Secondly, what are the current coffee brands in the market ? how are they performing ? how good is Gourmt select coffee compared to others? what are strategies of pricing . is it providing competitive pricing compared to other good coffee brands.As prompt says first it will be introduced in the super markets and blind assumption was made that word of mouth will help in advertising the product. but this statement completely weakens the whole marketing strategy. How can we expect that just putting the new coffee brand in to the racks of the super market makes the customers to buy it, without knowing what it is and seeing any new product for the first time how can we expect the customer to buy it.

However, The advertising is good idea as it planned but it is good to make the advertisement first and make the release to the market, so that people are aware of whereabouts of the product. The statement fails completely to provide any information that how it is better than any other product's in the market and the quality of the product.

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Average: 6.1 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 339.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86135693215 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61780158942 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498525073746 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.6968067543 57.8364921388 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253068789188 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688372141424 0.0743258471296 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764116820809 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129436680562 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518624434194 0.0628817314937 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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