Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at

The authors argument about decreasing numbers of deer on islands in Canada's Arctic regions as suggested by the hunters may seem reasonable but as we think more precisely then it has many holes and assumptions.As those deer travel from one glacial part to another part in search of foods,global warming may be a reason for their numbers being decreasing but that is not enough because as global warming increases earths temperature so many places will be filled with grasses in which deer can feed easily without moving to another place in quest for foods.so this claims does not provide sufficient information about dwindling deer population further more as cited by the local hunters the reason behind decreasing population of deer may be because of their excessive hunting or may be because of lack of food deer may have shifted to another place for foods.Also it is unclear that how many hunters were questioned about decreasing numbers of deer, it may be just few peoples or hundreds.I would like to know the numbers or percentage of deer spotted in accordance to previous years and current years to be clear about local hunters claim.In conclusion,there isn't sufficient information based on the argument to safely state the direct relationship between global warming and decreasing deer population.The writer needs to do further research in order to bolster his or hers opinion like consulting with people associated with wildlife conservation organizations and collecting data more precisely.

Votes
Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 2260.96107784 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 441.139720559 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21991701245 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87162712008 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585062240664 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 705.55239521 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 19.7664670659 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 241.0 22.8473053892 1055% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 57.8364921388 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1258.0 119.503703932 1053% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 241.0 23.324526521 1033% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 43.0 5.70786347227 753% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142895239883 0.218282227539 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142895239883 0.0743258471296 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0701772020484 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142895239883 0.128457276422 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 123.7 14.3799401198 860% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -173.14 48.3550499002 -358% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.1628742515 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.3 12.197005988 798% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.48 12.5979740519 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.78 8.32208582834 238% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 12.3882235529 452% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 98.4 11.1389221557 883% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 124.0 11.9071856287 1041% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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