In the above letter, the writer writes about the reduction of the mopeds for the reduction of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrains. There are no strong evidences that the accident are caused by the mopeds only, there can be other vehicles too.
There is no clear explanation why this method should be applied.
Firstly,the writer cites about the population increase during summer months on Balmer Island. The more the population, the more is the number of moped required to facilitate them. And how can they decide to reduce the number of the mopeds??
There can be other vehicles too responsible for the accident`s. People who might be new to the island might not have proper knowledge about the traffic rules of that area and that might have caused accidents. The town council can`t just decide to reduce the moped number without considering these facts.
Secondly, the number of people in the neighboring island of Seaville might be less than on Balmer Island during summer season. People of Seaville might have proper knowledge about the traffic rules and regulations. Proper traffic operation might have been prevalent on that island. There is no such warrent that the reduction policy can be effective for Balmer Island too.
There can be other many factors that can minimize the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrains.
And we haven`t talked about the road conditions of both the Island. The conditons of the road might have been better in Seaville such that this factor might have add aid in reducing the accidents numbers. The designs of the roads might have been favorable in the Seaville for moped such that there are different lane for the pedestrain and the moped than that might have been seen on Balmer. There might be proper implementation of the traffic rules, signs and regulations. So, there can be various factors that governs the cirsumstances.
In sum, there must be flawless clarity in the evidence so that the conclusion could be warrent without any speciousness and it would undergrid the conclusion. Hence, without further statistical and convincing factors the above action can`t be carried out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.9520958084 185% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 353.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16997167139 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65051673215 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42776203966 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4727701539 57.8364921388 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.9047619048 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2380952381 5.70786347227 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24250110632 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874970048017 0.0743258471296 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073885403595 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130228270066 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821401199792 0.0628817314937 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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