The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station 039 Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news During this period most of the com

As the author assert, the television station has recently devoted more time to weather and local news and less time to national news, through the late-night news program. This change led to some complains about weather and local news, as well as some advertising cancelations by local businesses. the manager believes that restoring the news program to its previous form would solve these problems. while this argument is flawed based on some reasons which would be discussed in this essay.

First of all, the manager asserted that the complains involving weather and local news increased, but he/she did not mention that what are the complains exactly about. Are they completely against the broadcasting of this type of program? Or they are just suggesting some transformations about these news? Since if the second assumption is right, this means that the program has been successful in attracting its audiences, while the program is not perfectly implemented and has the potential to be enhanced.

Furthermore, the fact that the businesses canceled their advertising is apparently contraversial. As there was not any reports from the TV to show that the audiences decreased, or no research has been implied about the reductions in the consumers of the above mentioned local businesses. Therefore it seems that the businesses decision to cancel their advertising might not be based on a good reasoning.

Finally, restoring the circumstances to its previous level might not solve the problem, since the trust between TV station, audiences and the businesses is broken.

In conclusion, the most rational decision from my personal stand point, is to implement a research about the specific subject of the complaints made by audiences, as well as the change in sales and costumers of the local businesses, in order to find out the influences of the recent changes on this problems and making a better decision for the television's next move. While this might also be beneficial to review the reasons which the existing changes were made due to them.

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Average: 7 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ising cancelations by local businesses. the manager believes that restoring the new...
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Suggestion: While
...evious form would solve these problems. while this argument is flawed based on some r...
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Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...evious form would solve these problems. while this argument is flawed based on some r...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...t suggesting some transformations about these news? Since if the second assumption is righ...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...f the above mentioned local businesses. Therefore it seems that the businesses decision t...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...y personal stand point, is to implement a research about the specific subject of the comp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt a research about the specific subject of the complaints made by audiences, as ...
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Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...the influences of the recent changes on this problems and making a better decision f...
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Line 9, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...decision for the televisions next move. While this might also be beneficial to review...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 2260.96107784 77% => OK
No of words: 332.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21385542169 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83117629703 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.70958083832 332% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7682132613 57.8364921388 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.642857143 119.503703932 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 5.70786347227 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307695714027 0.218282227539 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103108691105 0.0743258471296 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128761640755 0.0701772020484 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147701346389 0.128457276422 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142760073603 0.0628817314937 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 333 350
No. of Characters: 1681 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.048 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.758 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.519 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.652 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5