"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
Business manager of Television station claims that national news are more seen by the viewers at late-night then weather and local news. It is seen that large number of viewers are interested in national news instead other types of news. The viewers who are not interested in national news had complain about their decrease in coverage of weather and local news.
First of all, Every subscriber has right to watch the content as he needed, their should not be any complaint from their side about the content which TV station shows. It may seen that their is limited number of channels the TV station has.
Local advertising businesses also cancelled the contract with the TV station, may be this is because of their weak services. Advertising agency may have been aware about their flawed services so they may have rejected the contract with them. It also possible that their may be any conflict in between them so that they have cancelled the advertising contract.
Finally manager states that to attract more viewers, and to avoid losing the advertising revenues, they should restore the time devoted to weather and local news. May be the reason for their downfall is different then what they are assuming. Their may be a weak service provided by that TV station. They also can include the separate channel for weather and local news to avoid the complaints from national news viewers. Otherwise, The problem will be raised and their reputation can also harm more than ever.
Considering the viewers requirement, by taking the surveys of their viewers interest, They should take the proper decisions to be in good reputed state. Moreover, The maintenance of every receivers channel is equally important.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1394 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.908 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.406 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.933 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.31 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.36 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.171 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
...are not interested in national news had complain about their decrease in coverage of wea...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
...are not interested in national news had complain about their decrease in coverage of wea...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
... content which TV station shows. It may seen that their is limited number of channel...
^^^^
Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...hich TV station shows. It may seen that their is limited number of channels the TV st...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ve cancelled the advertising contract. Finally manager states that to attract more vie...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... devoted to weather and local news. May be the reason for their downfall is differ...
^^
Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... reason for their downfall is different then what they are assuming. Their may be a ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
...o harm more than ever. Considering the viewers requirement, by taking the surveys of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 284.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02112676056 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46952261702 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8265475221 57.8364921388 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205100881694 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085683542452 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104613827965 0.0701772020484 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117029252704 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120901575033 0.0628817314937 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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