Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
The author says that prehistorily people belived Woven baskets were made only by the Palean people, but recently archaeologists discovered that "Palean" basket were not only made by Palean people but was also had some connections with villagers of Lithos. Author proves this by saying that the discovery archaeologistshad,concluded that people of Paleans could have crossed the Brim river by the Palean boats but they couldnt find any thus it suggested that Palean baskets were not only made by only one village. I found seriously some flaws in given prompt and before concluding to any output following question must be answered first.
In todays world we buy materials with the mean of money, but in prehistoric time we know there was batter system thus maybe there is possibality that villagers of Palea had exchange or traded "Palean" basket to other village in form of other material that they might needed. The prompt suggests archaeologists discovered such Palean baskets in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea, but prompt could not justify that those baskets were orginated or were made by the villagers of Lithos. If villagers of Palea used Palean basket as a trading object with other villages in form of batter system, then the prompt will be in seriously flaw.
Prompt suggests that, The Brim river is very deep and broad but fails to suggests the villagers uses the river as the only mode of transportation to other villages.
It could be possible that people of Palea uses cart or horse riding as mode of transportation to other villages, also this could be possible that as river Brim was very deep and broad that it was difficult to travel across to other side or at other port with the mean of boats and also it could be possible that there may be accidents occured and to prevent it from futher people of panea dont use river for mode of transportation, and thus no boats were found. If the above suggested is true then it will futher add to the flaw of the prompt.'
Thus if the author wants to prove the prompt is fully truth above raised assupmtions must be declined by further evidence.
Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1737 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.707 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.476 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.429 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.421 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.673 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , concluded
...ing that the discovery archaeologistshad,concluded that people of Paleans could have cross...
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Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...Brim river by the Palean boats but they couldnt find any thus it suggested that Palean ...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'suggest'.
Suggestion: suggest
...ver is very deep and broad but fails to suggests the villagers uses the river as the onl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ossible that as river Brim was very deep and broad that it was difficult to trave...
^^
Line 6, column 391, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... prevent it from futher people of panea dont use river for mode of transportation, a...
^^^^
Line 6, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ortation, and thus no boats were found. If the above suggested is true then it wil...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...uther add to the flaw of the prompt. Thus if the author wants to prove the prompt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 368.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86100914817 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442934782609 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.966456957 57.8364921388 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.4 119.503703932 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 23.324526521 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.70786347227 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225194341107 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993699360035 0.0743258471296 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942204571233 0.0701772020484 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113497149903 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109446190477 0.0628817314937 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 14.3799401198 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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