In the preceding statement, the author claims that there is a connection between success and sleep, which allows who need less hours of sleep to have greater chances to prosper. While it may be true that the amount of sleep needed measures the prospects of success, the author presents a poorly reasoned argument, based on several questionable premises and assumptions. Therefore, based solely on the evidence the author offers, we cannot accept this argument as valid.
The primary issue with the author’s reasoning lies in his unsubstantiated premises. The thesis defended is that success and s...
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 477 350
No. of Characters: 2425 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.673 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.084 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.665 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 180 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.721 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.477 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5