Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Can a formal education mint formal success students? You may wonder: how to define "formal education" and how to detect its impact on students. Usually, we refer it to be conducted in a class where students are instilled with knowledge which is considered necessary by educational institutions, meaning that a certain group of students, especially a large crowd, are indoctrated with the same education. Thus, a suspicion arises whether this kind of education truly cater to each individual student. As far as I am concerned, my position is allied with the statement that this kind of education contr...
Subscribe as testbig VIP readers and get unlimited access to essays on the top list.
Sentence: The statement claims not and neither do I. As it has been mentioned above, every student are distinct in their characteristics, learning ability, social skills etc. Therefore, without a full awareness of this point, not only does a formal education fail to realize its aim to lead students to be successful as it is taken for granted, but also these students can be neglects in their individual desire for being cultivated.
Description: The fragment , every student is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/gmatgre
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 444 350
No. of Characters: 2242 1500
No. of Different Words: 230 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.59 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.05 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.128 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 102 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 71 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.878 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.153 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5