Government should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition .
we usually see that government has started many scholarship program for those student who can't pay fee and as well as get good marks . but here the issue topic is college and university education should be free for all students , fully financed by the government . i don't agree this statement. scholarship should get only those intelligent and industrious students works for it . government has many kind of policy like medical , orphan home, old age home etc . all they need fund .
in each university or college , there are thousands of students if government started to fund each of students , rest policies how will be manage ? if any students who can't pay fee they should demand scholarship, if the student is really deserving government or college authority give him scholarship . if you want to study further improve your skills , this add extra quality in student and apply for scholarship if college authority thinks that you are deserving candidate they will provide you full financed education . by this they will become more industrious .
additionally , if government started financed education for each students , student will not take study seriously . now a days many parents pressurize their children to get good marks .they know their parents have to pay fee so they must pass in their exams . but when the government financed the amount , they don;t care about their exam . they think they can do next year .this deteriorate their skills and learning power . to increases their skill they should held scholarship test, according to ranking of students ,provide scholarship .
summarize,government should financed for education , but not for all students . in this policy they should make criteria for students according to their financial condition , academic back ground , their present performance .government can also give them part time job so that they can independent for their study . this makes more confident them . this is also very useful for their future . this may consider in their job placements. in last government financed education on basis of ability .
Sentence: in each university or college , there are thousands of students if government started to fund each of students , rest policies how will be manage ? if any students who can't pay fee they should demand scholarship, if the student is really deserving government or college authority give him scholarship . if you want to study further improve your skills , this add extra quality in student and apply for scholarship if college authority thinks that you are deserving candidate they will provide you
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: additionally , if government started financed education for each students , student will not take study seriously . now a days many parents pressurize their children to get good marks .they know their parents have to pay fee so they must pass in their exams . but when the government financed the amount , they don;t care about their exam . they think they can do next year .this deteriorate their skills and learning power . to increases their skill they should held scholarship test, according to
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and students
Suggestion: Refer to to and increases
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to should and held
Sentence: summarize,government should financed for education , but not for all students . in this policy they should make criteria for students according to their financial condition , academic back ground , their present performance .government can also give them part time job so that they can independent for their study . this makes more confident them . this is also very useful for their future . this may consider in their job placements. in last government financed education on basis of ability .
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to should and financed
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to can and independent
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No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.078 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.602 2.4
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 34.013 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.509 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.753 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.181 0.07
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