Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position

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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

In concordance with the statement we may note that preserving wilderness has currently become our prime goal not only because of the massive extinction rates of different wildlife but also for the health of our planet which is becoming affected heavily by global warming.But this law should be applicable in some moderation since not every country in the planet has reached economical stability.Instead of preserving the entire current wilderness resource one should set aside a percentage of compulsory wilderness areas allowing forest-rich with economically unstable countries to use their resource...

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