As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology in the last century up till now is the biggest contributor in the development of human beings . Our world has progressed most in these decade and mostly credits must given to person who created different technologies around the year. Use of technology has enhanced our thinking capacities in the following ways.
For example in case of a calculator ,people rely on it for time consuming and hard calculations which saves their time and energy . Problem arises when people rely on it for even simple calculations which is not advisable because if in case the devise is not available then it might create hurdle because they are totally dependent on it. Although people can save time and utilize precious time for more innovative and on creating other technologies which benefit us .
Humans capacity to think will not deteriorate with the use of technology in fact they will get better understanding in studies with the help of visual studies through internet and presentation power point etc . People will come to know what is happening in the world and will become more competent and well informed. World has become closer and closer because of the advancement in communications. People can place meetings with the help of visual communications, if they all can’t come to attend the meeting which is important.
With the help of technologies, people can become better innovators with the help of current technology. In fact there are sound and light technologies which helps people in focusing on a thing for a longer time, better understanding and even increasing IQ LEVEL of the people , For example brainwave technology . With this people can quickly recall memories other than which would be very difficult for them . They can get better perception of smell, sound and other things happening in their environment. People can solve complex problems in their mind itself because it clarifies things better than normal . People can benefit a lot from these technology.
In short human thinking will surely improve rather deteriorate from use of the technology because it gives time and energy to them for creating something innovative and out of the box rather than just hardwork . Technology is a big boon to the mankind and to all the living species in the world.
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