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Many people believe that the infrastructure build in the city such as schools, airports, courthouses, airports and libraries should reflect the history of the city and the culture and tradition, attitudes and values of the past people. On the contrary, there are some people who think that the public buildings of today reveal much about the present day society and hence all the buildings which are meant for public today reflect the values, new lifestyle and attitudes of the present day. I would like to refute the former group of people and would agree with the latter one.

To begin with, I completely believe in learning new things. One should never step back to learn new things. When the new buildings of today such as schools, colleges, libraries, airports and courthouses are built with new thoughts, they thoroughly reflect the attitudes and values of the young generation and the present society. These new thoughts help the people to know what is going on around them. For instance, if a new school is established with new technology including electronic computers and hi-tech system, then it will be very helpful for students to come forward and learn with full enthusiasm. This will make a new way for the coming generation to enhance themselves with modern techniques and paves way for a brighter future.

Secondly, as today’s new infrastructure reflects the new thoughts and values of today’s society, it means that the society is developing and soon there will be more and more developments. While some believe in learning the history and knowing the past, I think that though it is important, it is not very much helpful if one wants to more forward and learn modern innovations and help oneself in development. Today, a majority of cities are building the infrastructure depending on the modern values and attitudes of the young generation, mainly because everybody want to learn new things in life and each of us want to reach at greater level in life, which is not possible without knowing what is going around us.

In conclusion, I completely agree with the statement which tells us today’s public buildings reflect the values and attitudes of the modern day society. With specific examples and reasons stated above I urge all the cities to build infrastructure with new and fresh thinking which will help the young generation to have a better future.

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yes, you are improved. Even though still you wrote the intro and conclusion 'normal'. Your body is much better than ever before.
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No. of Different Words: 170 200 (in intro and conclusion, you repeat words a lot of times)

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