1.In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain y

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1. In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position

The author of prompt has purposed that the best type of artwork is the one which is comprehensible by most people. This is a claim with which I mostly do concur. Among the countless reasons backing my perspective, I would list the most conspicuous ones in what follows.

The first striking reason which should be considered is that the art is the common language of communication. Indeed, it is an international language which aids the people from various nationalities, belief, intelligence, or even age range to communicate and interact with each other. This fact is also verified by a recently conducted study in my country. According to this noteworthy, intelligible study, painting_ as a one form of art work_ is understandable by a two-year-old kid. At this age range, meanwhile, the learned vocabulary capacity of a kid is approximately three hundred words, which is paucity for convenient communication, he can use paint to convey his propose and feeling. Or in the past, while people who lived in the cave did not have the communication language, they used the painting in caves as a mean of transferring their purpose. So, keeping art simpler is a way that everyone can understand and use it, it will be an easier way of interaction among the people.

Another noteworthy reason which should be highlighted is that the artwork is one of the methods of informing about the cultural value. In other words, the cultural importance and belief shape the citizens' idea, and this idea is the base of performing artistic work differently in varied locations. Therefore, the studying of artwork specified to a specific region could be a method for knowing about the place. in this scenario, as long as the contents of the works are abstract and easy to understand, the more data and information would be transferred to the audience. An instance which can shed a spotlight on the issue is the stranger tourists who visit different countries. Although they do not have the knowledge over their visited places' native language; they get familiar with those places by visiting the museums and art galleries. Since by this action, they could get some background by visiting the artwork and without learning the native language. Consequently, as the arts keep simple and generally understandable, more data can be presented to the foreigner.

However, the aforesaid reasons should not be overgeneralized, especially by the consideration of the simplification effect on the artistic values of artwork. In fact, an art beyond its abstraction is so complicated and can be categorized in the different genera and styles, each of which has a unique and distinguishable feature. In this case, by keeping the artworks in its low level to make it understandable for entire people can negatively influence its artistic value. For example, if an artist of Renaissance style tries to make his work so simple, he has completely worked against the style's principle; and that work cannot be grouped in the Renaissance art.

To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons explicitly depict that the artwork should be kept simple. As art is a communication substance and conveys the cultural value. However, this abstraction should not shed shadow on the artistic values or work; otherwise, entire artistic works get peal and identical, which is against the spirit of creativity at the artwork.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2827.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09369369369 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09446857081 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506306306306 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 881.1 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9206412774 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.08 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20001728068 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595902781292 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372446434192 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121328114826 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240634538978 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 100.480337079 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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