1. The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Human mind is a mysterious object as it can stores large section of data and could use in the exact time of need. It is often seen that no matter how complicated things get human mind can outspend it. I mostly agree that the human mind is far superior to the machine for many reasons. However, in certain cases machinery power contradicts this statement.
Though we human have created these machines but in certain aspects this machines are far superior to us. Can we think of reaching far space without the support of transport? Again a computer is created by human but it function far more efficiently than any genius can. Machine has that accuracy to perform any task repetitively without losing its efficiency which is almost impossible for human. It is probable that human mind can perform arduous work but not for more time, they lose focus and become easily fatigue. However, machines accomplish those task without losing its focus. Also, these machines such as computer are superior than human in terms of speed. For example: if equations are entered in the excel sheet, the results are obtained immediately without any error. This operation may take huge time for even a brightest mathematician.
However, in some cases Human mind is far more superior to the machine as machine are the only tools of human minds; without specific input, the machine would not be able to perform any task independently. Machines are usually invented by human to perform monotonous and tedious jobs such as the household appliances, typewriter and machines in the industry; some machines facilitate in our daily life, such as transportation tools, mobile phones and computers. These machines cannot perform without the input provided by the human beings-they lack thinking capability, they even need human support for processing any task. For example: calculator itself cannot perform computation, it needs human assistance in entering the data. Likewise, machines such as car are operated only after manual handling.
Moreover, numerous factor demonstrates that human mind display more superiority than the machine. Emotion is such factor which makes human superior to the machine, it makes human empathize and relate to certain problem. This is very important in case of moral issues and dilemmas. For example: solution of the social issue needed logical thinking that machines lack and proper solution cannot be obtained. Also, these machines are unable to generate new creative ideas. Due to this, it is seen that field related to art, literature and medicine are mastered by the people, as innovation in such field also involve human emotion. For example, it is seen that human creates sublime arts when he/she is fully entrenched in the emotion, every art shows the emotion of any subject. If any robot doctor, he may perform any operation and incase of death of patient he may lack sympathy. Emotion is crucial subject which machines lacks.
While some people may predict that machine technology can be efficient than the human mind in few limited fields. But, presence of remarkable features like emotion and creativity and independent make human far more superior to the machine. Human mind is far more powerful than any tools invented so far.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'store'
Suggestion: store
...n mind is a mysterious object as it can stores large section of data and could use in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...uld use in the exact time of need. It is often seen that no matter how complicate...
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Message: Did you mean 'functions'?
Suggestion: functions
...n a computer is created by human but it function far more efficiently than any genius ca...
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Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
... machines such as computer are superior than human in terms of speed. For example: i...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...or example: if equations are entered in the excel sheet, the results are obtained immedia...
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Suggestion: the
...s operation may take huge time for even a brightest mathematician. However, in...
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Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: in case of
...octor, he may perform any operation and incase of death of patient he may lack sympathy. ...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rucial subject which machines lacks. While some people may predict that machine te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2726.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 531.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13370998117 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55990744785 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491525423729 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 888.3 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.326064567 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8666666667 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414962327145 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125414849661 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106758254502 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275091604459 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776490340699 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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