94) The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position

The effectiveness of a country's leaders is an individual ability that they have, while the administration of a country is a comprehensive solution made by the Government in most of the countries in the world. As my concern, the effectiveness of the country leaders is not well measured by the discovering the well-being of that country's citizens. The effective country leaders may not enhance the well-being of the country. Also, the well-being of the citizen may not reflect the high efficient leader of the country. I will address my views as below.

To begin with, effectiveness of the county's leaders is essential for the Government while the Government is made up with lots of people, even if the leader of the country is efficient enough, the group which excecute the policy that he made may still work slowly as the comoplicated procedures in the Government. Let's take China for example. Decades ago, Chinese people were very poor ,lots of us stil lived for surviving due to the starvation. At that time, our Chairman Mao was so effective that he had almost studied every places in China, that he left traces at nearly every city. Also he led the Government to operate for more than twenty years after the establishment of New CHina. However, the people were still poor and unliterated. That was not because of the low efficiency of the country , but , that was because the poor situation of New China.

On the other hand, the well-being of the citizens could not reflect the efficiency of the country leaders. Sometimes, they are the efforts of the people themselves or the local government.We should make clear of the cause of the happy life. Even in the most rich country in the world like Switserland, there are beggers who beggin for life. So the effectiveness may help them out of some trouble, but the well-being is anther case. People should mostly do it on their own. Or the Local government would lead the locals to run business in new ways.

Finally, the effectiveness of the country's leaders could be measured in lots of ways, I should admit the the well-being of the people is an important criterion while not the best way. In that in the Government, less meetings while more effective policies maybe the reflcetion of the efficeint leaders. From the perspect of the citizens, a bright future for them could also be a standard for the effective leaders as they made people see the hope of themselves.

In conclusion, we are not living in a perfect country, it is significant for the people to evaluate their political leaders in many fields including the effcetiveness, by this way ,the leaders would get to know how his work does and more important , what his/her people want.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83405172414 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79530945244 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474137931034 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3444447635 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.954545455 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215642303365 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709024658081 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861319732384 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127770146564 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863964505921 0.0667264976115 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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