High morals and ethics provide a strong foundational ground for any person that makes him successful in the future. Government officials are viewed in the light of scrutiny always, hence it becomes necessary for them to maintain higehest levels of ethical and moral standards. The prompt here asserts that high moral and ethical standards should be the go to virtues for public officials to be effective leaders. Undoubtedly, the prompt is completely jusitified in its assertion for the reasosns that are as deatiled below.
To begin with, as public officials are often supposed to work on public issues and resolve public grieviances, they are often in contact of the public. If the public finds out that a particular official takes part in immoral activities, they might begin to loose trust in the government and its offices. A single public official misbehaving or not keeping up moral or ethical conduct can tarnish the image of not only the department he works for but also of the government as a whole. For instance, Last year United States saw the largest of protests in the country when George Floyd was mudered by a single cop when he was being arrested. The cop did not adhere to moral and ethical standards that are amandatory for police officers rather he inhumanely asyphixated Mr Floyd. This not only caused the image of the Florida police department to be tarnished but the protests that later followed also tarnished the image of US as a democracy. This incident is a clear reminder that how a single instance where public officials do not work according to prescribed morals and ethics in their line of duty can lead to decline in trust of people int he government.
Secondly, when officials are found violating morals and ethics it is not common to see protests and hostility towards government. These portests in turn fuel political instability in the country which is followed by economic slump. For instance, during the BLM protest the conduct of president Trump and his government was called into question. What followed soon was a no-confidence motion against the government which president trump was able to save his presidency from barely. However, the markets responded neagatively ot this political storm in Washington and stock markets collapsed by 10 full percentage points. Clearly, not keeping up moral and ethical standards by public officials can lead to a chain of chaotic events that can ultimately lead to economic harm.
However, some people believe that moral and ethical conduct should not be considered for a publc official as his work is seperate from his conduct. However, this view discounts the fact that
personal conduct translates to workplace conduct. What it means is that how a persons values from his peronal sphere can easily seep into his workplace values compromising his effectiveness as a public official. Thus, we can conclude to preserve public confidence in the government machinery and avoid setting off a chain of cahotic events, it is very important for a public official to uphold highest levels of morals and ethics at all times.
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...immoral activities, they might begin to loose trust in the government and its offices...
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... largest of protests in the country when George Floyd was mudered by a single cop...
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...ington and stock markets collapsed by 10 full percentage points. Clearly, not kee...
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...wever, this view discounts the fact that personal conduct translates to workplace...
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...very important for a public official to uphold highest levels of morals and ethics at all time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2594.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05653021442 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70465289839 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1455937568 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.523809524 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194446645343 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062091753807 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524364332044 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112241510145 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320977232622 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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