An effective leader must possess various traits namely honesty, integrity, accountability, efficiency, and empathy. The given statement judges leader's effectiveness based on his moral and ethical standards, yet it is only one characteristic of many required to be an eminent demagogue. The leader's efficiency and accountability give effectiveness of the leader.
Firstly, there are numerous examples of leaders who are considered as great leaders who performed inhumanly acts. Cuban President Fidel Castro is touted as one of the greatest leaders of the communist people. Mr. Clinton, Former USA President, who was involved in a sex scandal also considered as effective leader. He very carefully maneuvered the USA economy in the recession. Therefore, the results delivered by the leaders is an important factor for considering their effectiveness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...equired to be an eminent demagogue. The leaders efficiency and accountability give effe...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple. Mr. Clinton, Former USA President, who was involved in a sex scandal also c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 33.0505617978 12% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 58.6224719101 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 2235.4752809 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 126.0 442.535393258 28% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8253968254 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 4.55969084622 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29360298302 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 215.323595506 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.4932671777 146% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 704.065955056 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8640147167 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.75 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165075300741 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698145957131 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523203908091 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138415281063 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696039101649 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.