To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
is it must for a leader to have highest ethical and moral standards in order to be effective? Well, the speaker believes so. While it may be sometimes, but to be a 'effective leader" I don't see extreme necessity of these conditions. because sometimes for being effective leader situation may demand these qualities to be sacrificed. Examples below will illustrate my point
For instance, consider a typical election campaign scenario in India. All the candidates are required to fill a nomination form in which they are supposed to disclose their assets, criminal cases against them etc. Assume that the leader is quite popular and is also known for doing good works for the society and he enjoys support of people of the locality. it is possible that there are certain cases against him, disclosure of which can turn him into a controversial figure and his popularity drops drastically which in turn damages his contention for the legislative assembly.
now let's consider the political scenario of china whereby a authoritative government is in power. there are certain things the leaders of china manage to hide from public because of dominance on media. people aren't allowed to use youtube, facebook etc. but the country constantly is progressing effectively in terms of economy and defence. However, the leaders in china maintain an image of a strong 'effective" government.
now lets focus on issuses regarding a country's defence .if the politicians in power were to disclose certain military weapons its developing for defending its territories will it do any good? Or say some nations are jointly planning to tackle terrorism. if they disclose such information out in public, then what's the use of those plans.
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...se such information out in public, then whats the use of those plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21708185053 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87839424509 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4110598252 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194393717829 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591893355439 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714316004647 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10217995596 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747872721761 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.