The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competetion

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competetion

leadership is the skill which is we need in every field whether its the Engineering, sports or business. leader is the one who represent the whole team unanimously, make all the important decision. whether a team loss or win, both the time maximum credit goes to the leader.

For instance we take the example of cricket, caption is the leader of the team, he take all the decision like which bolwer will bowl where will be the fielder in the field, what will be the batting order in which we are going to bat. Along with that a leader has to know about all his team member weakness and strong points, how to incorporate and make the maximum out of it. leader has to perform himself as well otherwise people will start critisising.Their is always the competition among the all the country team captions. who is the best best caption in the world.

Few people are born with the leardership quality, but many have to build the skill through experience and hard work. To learn leadership people have to ignore few things like some people will be nagging at the back of you. For example, Former Indian cricket team caption M.S. Dhoni, he has become 37 Plus of age, he has difficulty in batting but what discern he take or help the current caption in the field is commendable. So, In young people, to learn leardership skill we need to have a little bit sense of cooperation with the other people then only we will be learn.

it will be wrong to say to learn leadership, we always have to cooperate and avoid competions. For instance A CEO of a company has to some time has to make the cooperation with the competitor in order to sustain in the coporate world, but if we don't have a competition then his company will never grow to the top. some kind of ethecal competion is necessary to know your potential,uniqueness. And this take the 100 percent from you. From competition, young people will learn promptly. Nevertheless take the obnoxious step like malinger your competitor.

In conclusion, the best way for society to prepare their young people always it should be the conflages of cooperationa and lttle bit of competion, to make the best use of.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 383.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65796344648 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68652548205 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483028720627 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4219007989 57.8364921388 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.70786347227 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201498277221 0.218282227539 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615958737673 0.0743258471296 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638762902777 0.0701772020484 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128269211329 0.128457276422 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755148117905 0.0628817314937 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.3799401198 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.3550499002 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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