The best way in for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The future of the world rests upon the fletching generation. The way we tutor and instill them with qualities defines the future of the societies and the world. The statement clearly reflects the idea for the current generations to adapt to educating young people but is being too specific over one aspect and overlooking the other.
competition instills fear and to some extent instills to feel ill-will for the others. this side-effect of the competitive world has made our progress a little slower than we could have reached by assisting each other. this is evident from the fact of space missions of various countries. Though each country puts its own efforts for the space exploration, the sharing of the information by cooperating with each other makes each and every country strive for a common goal in exploring space.
A society is a culmination of all industries working in a harmonious nature. only by sharing information and acknowledging each others significance can create an impact to building a perfect society.this demands a that sense of feeling compelled to be left behind. also, cooperation also makes individual glean information for building a better society by taking examples or guidance from the past.
Leadership is a virtue that cannot be gained by showing supremacy or dictatorship has been long established. In order to become a leader, one must understand the ideology of his peers and his associates. this demands to work together to create a harmonious environment where everyone can thrive.
if a sense of pure competition is instilled in the younger sections of the generation, the future would more likely result in everyone being taciturn. Such an attitude would hamper the needs of the society and its well being and lead to atleast some sort of dictatorship.
It is true that having competition helps us in making a better version of ourselves. but in a society competition should exist only as a means of making ourselves more error free than as a measure for success. As the latter thinking can erode the very base of the ideology of the society.
competition and cooperation are both two sides of a coin.It depends on us in what ways we want to improve our societies. we cannot just build a society by pure cooperation or by pure competition.we need to find a right balance to both to instill the younger generation with , if we wish to make our society better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d have reached by assisting each other. this is evident from the fact of space missi...
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...ustries working in a harmonious nature. only by sharing information and acknowledgin...
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...eology of his peers and his associates. this demands to work together to create a ha...
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...nvironment where everyone can thrive. if a sense of pure competition is instil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well, sort of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04197530864 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87560389656 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545679012346 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7986542846 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274311190966 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701700908257 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558236756035 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115975447446 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520799856081 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.