The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wi

Today's world is a very competitive world. Everyone is filled with a sense of competition among his milieu. So the claim of the author that "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for a leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition" is a very debatable topic. On the one hand where it is true that a person needs to be cooperative with his colleagues, but on the other hand it is imperative that he needs to be competitive at the same time. The reasons for my position will be explained in subsequent paragraphs.

First of all, contemporary society is a very competitive society. Every person is thriving to survive in this society, be it by any means, by hook, or by crook. Due to this reason, people who are too trusting and credulous get cheated by others. So one has to be competitive in this society and should keep his benefits on his priority. For example, in a company, when a person reaches one of the top positions in the company, then he is supposed to be fully dedicated towards the company as he's aware of the inner workings of the company. He has to be competitive in nature to get his company to make the best of profits and make new deals. Suppose he leaks out some confidential details to some other person, which may result in the benefit of another company. So one has to be competitive in modern society.

On the other hand, it is true that every person should have a sense of cooperation also. In today's world, every person is supposed to work with a team at some or another stage in his life. If the person is not cooperative, then he would be seen as a pariah by his colleagues. Especially, when in a leadership position, a person has to be cooperative and flexible enough to understand the various needs of his teammates and the problems faced by them. He just cannot remain in his own bubble. He has to work with every member of the team and thrive for excellence in a collective notion as not only his but his team's progress will be counted. Also in fields like politics, while making a policy or taking any decision, you ought to consider the views of everyone and understand what people want. Cooperation is the key to success in such fields.

Also, human beings live in societies. They interact with tons of people in their daily life. Every person has a different point of view and different thoughts. So sometimes, this leads to arguments between the people. So it is upon us to be cooperative and try to understand other person's viewpoint. We've to stay collectively in this society and make it better.

Hence, to conclude, the basic requisite in today's world, according to me, is to have a sense of cooperation along with being competitive to survive in society. Having a sense of cooperation helps a human being in becoming a better member of society while being competitive ensures his survival in the world and pushes him to be the best.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, still, then, while, as to, for example, first of all, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 58.6224719101 159% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2448.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59287054409 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77050413836 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444652908068 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6503968326 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4137931034 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3793103448 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1724137931 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191683867111 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511803182501 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653610390184 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118666177393 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765166898542 0.0667264976115 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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