The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The given statement is interesting as it suggests that a society can benefit by giving a sense of cooperation, instead of competition, to its young people and prepare them in this way for leadership roles in various sectors. We are all taught from a very young age on the power we hold if we work together on something rather than as an individual and I stongly agree with it. Creating competion among them will not only waste time and resources, the outcome of that will not be benficial to every member of the society.
Cooperation among individuals from varying background helps society to build itself in a better and organized manner. Young people are the future leaders of any country while being its important members. They are moldable, so what and how we teach them effects not only those individuals but the way in which the country will function in future. The most relatable example of this would be about the climate change issue. Solving climate change will require the future leaders of different countries, industries, NGOs and other organisations to cooperate with each other on a global level. Only in this way, we can solve the climate crisis which the human society is facing.
Furthermore, in a world where we want the society to grow, having a sense of coopertaion will help in overall betterment because while working together we can definitely find ways to get a win-win situation for all the parties and stakeholders involved. For example, if the United States government want to reduce its carbon emission through vehicles and increase the electric vehicles on road, then it will need the heads of government to work along with the automotive industry and their leadership body to achieve this goal.
Based on the above-mentioned viewpoints and examples, I strongly believe that the best way is to have a sense of cooperation among the young people of the society who, someday, will be the responsible leaders in government and many other industries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... way in which the country will function in future. The most relatable example of this wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96396396396 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74451145998 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552552552553 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4184692796 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256528613781 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898041572604 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649725820064 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160240644524 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027148873037 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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