The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
society consist of divergence culture, mindset and behaviour. In order to understant the society we have to examin the men and women both. Nowadays there is not gender inequality, both women and men are contributing to the society.
To illustrate, we should not only consider the characteristic of the personality how are chooses as its heroes or its role models, instead we should examin all the human being living in the society. most of people in the society are strugling to get success. few are got success through hard work and some kind of luck. few people after getting success attain some kind of arrogance, which is not good for the society as well as for himself. For example, Indian very popular comidian show "The comedy night with kapil". kapil was a very gregarious person earlier, once his comedy show became all of a sudden very famous, kapil started to get some arrogance in him. kapil started talking in the impudent manner to the staff and the colleague. The reminace of this, most of the eminent character felt the show. And the TRP of the show became less less. Conversly, Not all get arrogance attidude once successfull. but In the society from which kapil belong will have the same behaviour. And people in kapil society will not also like to bahave in the same manner.
In addition to it, there are many person in the society who are not successfull but create the indelible remark to the society, For instance ram helping the old person or blind in crossing the roads. ram is not a heroric or a role model but the work he did more then being a hero. So scoiety should not neglect all these activity, instead try to appriciate and make a awesom awarness among other people of the society by evoking them to do helpfull kind of stuff. we can also take the example of Bollywood king Sharuk khan who has been caught spoking in the cricket stadiam during IPL matches.
In contrast to it, many great personailty create the profound example for other from which other get influence . For instance, Salman khan who put on fitness chanllenges for the normal people of the world. Promulgate the effectiveness of being healthy and fit , help other how to become fit.
In conclusion, Not only the role model should be examin but the normal person should also be exmain, because society doesn't consist of only heoic people, there are many normal people as well.
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society consist of divergence culture, mindset ...
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...iour. In order to understant the society we have to examin the men and women both...
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... the human being living in the society. most of people in the society are strugling ...
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... the human being living in the society. most of people in the society are strugling to get suc...
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...e society are strugling to get success. few are got success through hard work and s...
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...hrough hard work and some kind of luck. few people after getting success attain som...
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...l started to get some arrogance in him. kapil started talking in the impudent manner ...
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...he show. And the TRP of the show became less less. Conversly, Not all get arrogance attid...
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...he show. And the TRP of the show became less less. Conversly, Not all get arrogance attid...
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...e manner. In addition to it, there are many person in the society who are not successfull ...
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... person or blind in crossing the roads. ram is not a heroric or a role model but th...
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...r a role model but the work he did more then being a hero. So scoiety should not neg...
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...hero. So scoiety should not neglect all these activity, instead try to appriciate and make a a...
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...ity, instead try to appriciate and make a awesom awarness among other people of t...
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...king them to do helpfull kind of stuff. we can also take the example of Bollywood ...
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...for other from which other get influence . For instance, Salman khan who put on fi...
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...e effectiveness of being healthy and fit , help other how to become fit. In con...
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...nclusion, Not only the role model should be examin but the normal person should a...
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... should also be exmain, because society doesnt consist of only heoic people, there are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75240384615 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45261986455 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502403846154 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6880617003 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9565217391 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186314544972 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518276359801 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491165109862 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983728032155 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444550328811 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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