Statement is stated that there should be no government enforcement on the parents to educate their children.Statement explains that education should not be the apex concern for the government. government should leave that on parents.
clearly statement is making the education trivial.But Education is something that has made us sophisticated homo sepians different from our so called ancestors monkey.I fundamentally disagree with what author is saying.
firstly from the beginning of the human being , human is going in a single direction , a developing direction.from a invention of fire to the human stepping on a moon.humans have developed themselves by education. Not in just a field of science, human are developed in social and economical culture as well. from caves to sky-scrappers human changed the living standard. And from eating of raw meat to finely cooked food. learning and education is something that has made this journey possible is such fast lane.Human is a social creature, and society is formed by so many educated, wise people.to live in the society without any obstructions it is essential to match up the standard with other people.in every field education is important whether it is a field of communication or whatever.So the education is must to sustain in such sophisticated world.
Take an example of someone who is born intelligent but somehow because of circumstances he failed to get substantial education. he will have to be at the lower position in the society. despite of having innate wisdom or intelligence on should have the contemporary knowledge about world, sense of communication, how to sustain in a society, how to develop without being a barrier to anyone is essential. If such basic knowledge is not given to a children he would never be able to thrive and sustain in a current competitive world.
Glancing at such a huge importance of education government should make a forceful policy to educate every single child so that in future they will have better citizens. If the country children are not educated then country may face serious trouble in developing.In sum government should enforce every parents to educate their children instead of letting them decide about the education of their child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Statement
...n the parents to educate their children.Statement explains that education should not be t...
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Suggestion: Government
...be the apex concern for the government. government should leave that on parents. clearly ...
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Suggestion: Clearly
...vernment should leave that on parents. clearly statement is making the education trivi...
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Suggestion: But
...atement is making the education trivial.But Education is something that has made us...
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Suggestion: I
...ent from our so called ancestors monkey.I fundamentally disagree with what author...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...disagree with what author is saying. firstly from the beginning of the human being ,...
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Suggestion: ,
...ly from the beginning of the human being , human is going in a single direction , ...
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Suggestion: ,
...g , human is going in a single direction , a developing direction.from a invention...
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...direction , a developing direction.from a invention of fire to the human stepping...
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... social and economical culture as well. from caves to sky-scrappers human changed th...
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Suggestion: Learning
...ting of raw meat to finely cooked food. learning and education is something that has mad...
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Suggestion: Human
...this journey possible is such fast lane.Human is a social creature, and society is fo...
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Suggestion: So
...is a field of communication or whatever.So the education is must to sustain in suc...
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ication or whatever.So the education is must to sustain in such sophisticated world. ...
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Suggestion: He
...he failed to get substantial education. he will have to be at the lower position i...
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Suggestion: Despite
...e at the lower position in the society. despite of having innate wisdom or intelligence...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...If such basic knowledge is not given to a children he would never be able to thrive and su...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... future they will have better citizens. If the country children are not educated t...
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... may face serious trouble in developing.In sum government should enforce every par...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231770833333 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.184895833333 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106770833333 0.0880659088768 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0497285424764 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0338541666667 0.0444667217837 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130208333333 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0546875 0.0406280797675 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09648413266 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0390625 0.030933414821 126% => OK
Particles: 0.00520833333333 0.0016655270985 313% => OK
Determiners: 0.0989583333333 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286458333333 0.0249443105267 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015625 0.0148568991511 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2255.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 364.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19505494505 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409340659341 0.366273622748 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318681318681 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21978021978 0.200843997647 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.17032967033 0.132149295362 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09648413266 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546703296703 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 60.4919309369 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.534451778 59.4972553346 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.071428571 141.124799967 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 57.8681318681 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.64882698954 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201359782154 0.391690518653 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133103601444 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0905491802252 0.077325440228 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.618828133565 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.210225298411 0.149214159877 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915776352295 0.161403998019 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05980009901 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282172797151 0.385218514788 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0935572815525 0.0692045440612 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131243318287 0.275328986314 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066488407079 0.0653680567796 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.