Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.

The leadership must possess accountability, strategic outlook, innovative thinking, problem-solving capability, decision-making capacity, and integrity. Following traits are important for leadership to become successful. The given statement claims that leadership should step-down after five years for revitalization, and it will lead to success. Revitalization is required for innovation and break-through idea generation, but it is one of the factors required for success. While other factors such as problem-solving ability and strategic thinking are important for a sustainable enhancement of institution.

Firstly, success can be achieved if leadership knows problems in the system. For finding root causes of such problems, leaders must have in-depth knowledge of the subject. In such cases, experience of the leadership plays important role. Additionally, leadership must have knowledge of their available resources and team. Teamwork always makes any task easier. For working with team efficiently, leadership must have experience of working with team. It will help leadership to understand weakness and strength of the team. For instance, soldiers who already fought wars have great war-front experience. Those soldiers already know conditions during the war; therefore, it is not surprising for them. Such soldiers always emerge as great military leaders. Hence experience plays important role in the leadership.

Furthermore, some desicion are made for long term. Such strategic decision are made for trade, for foreign relations, and for economy. This policies varies leadership to leadership. If the leadership is inclinded towards capitalism then this decision are more industry friendly. But, if the leadership is oriented towards socialism then the decisions are more friendly towards social welfare. Constant policies in the field of trade, foreign relations, and economy are always helpful for development and long term planning for traders and corporates. Due to the above factors, if leadership is performing good then there is no need to change them.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 756, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...lways emerge as great military leaders. Hence experience plays important role in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1144278607 5.05705443957 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30526535843 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9815973604 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8125 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5625 23.4991977007 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196358650291 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638529220683 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06573171975 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157953907885 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522254513913 0.0667264976115 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.27 12.1639044944 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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