The success or failure of any organisation depends on the people in the organisation. These can be employees working at the lowest level to the management executives. The top management always drives the company direction based on situations and intellect. The domain knowledge experts help them steer the company in the correct direction. It always advisable to keep the best leader who can motivates the employees and have firms vision of better future. These positions are very powerful and deserves a lot of maturity to handle.
It's a very good approach to keep the dignity of these post upheld. In order to do so organisation should elect the best possible candidate. These candidates should be re-elected after certain period of time. This brings a new zeal in organisation with lot of other advantages. The process ensure that no one takes wrong advantage of the system for a long time which can avoid permanent damage to the system. New elect introduces new vision with new faces in administration to avoid status quo. The government in India follows the same process to elect the MLA in parliament after every 5 years. Though it has it own advantages on the other side it introduces a lot of chaos in the system. The new government stops a lot of schemes and introduces a new projects. This distorts the long term vision of the country.
On the other hand if the top management is honest and sincere to it subordinates the system runs smoothly with goal of achieving long term targets. The best example is China. The communist government has all the power that makes the growth of the country streamlined. The rate at which China had gained prominence in global market is commendable. The reason being stable management and futuristic long term goals. The process of taking decision are very efficient and effective. Though the system has has caused lot of human right violation issue but a large people are satisfied with the life the government offers.
The example of China need a through study that will surface out the subtleties involved in the successful environment for tremendous growth. But on an whole every organisation can't create such zeal at minuscule level. The better approach would be to keep the rotation policy active for executive positions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'motivate'
Suggestion: motivate
...visable to keep the best leader who can motivates the employees and have firms vision of ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...serves a lot of maturity to handle. Its a very good approach to keep the dignit...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ates should be re-elected after certain period of time. This brings a new zeal in organisation...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'ensures'.
Suggestion: ensures
...th lot of other advantages. The process ensure that no one takes wrong advantage of t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es. The process ensure that no one takes wrong advantage of the system for a long...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... MLA in parliament after every 5 years. Though it has it own advantages on the other s...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
... after every 5 years. Though it has it own advantages on the other side it introdu...
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Line 3, column 755, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'project'?
Suggestion: project
...s a lot of schemes and introduces a new projects. This distorts the long term vision of ...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the growth of the country streamlined. The rate at which China had gained prominen...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...inence in global market is commendable. The reason being stable management and fut...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... The reason being stable management and futuristic long term goals. The process ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gement and futuristic long term goals. The process of taking decision are very eff...
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Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: has
...cient and effective. Though the system has has caused lot of human right violation iss...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: THROUGH_THOROUGH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thorough' (accurate, exhaustive)?
Suggestion: thorough
...offers. The example of China need a through study that will surface out the subtlet...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...vironment for tremendous growth. But on an whole every organisation cant create su...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...wth. But on an whole every organisation cant create such zeal at minuscule level. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97643979058 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74749537692 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7016277052 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1153846154 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 5.21951772744 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127674387253 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321609059125 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038006544131 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675981618502 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261259965095 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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