Claim No act is done purely for the benefit of others Reason All actions even those that seem to be done for other people are based on self interest

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Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.

Reason: All actions — even those that seem to be done for other people — are based on self-interest.

The world is blessed with benevolent people striving for others’ welfare. As an allusion to the view of psychological egoism, the author claims that no action is purely done for the benefit of others for the reason that every altruistic act is based on self-interest. Given that every altruistic action has tangible or intangible rewards for the individual involved and the human instincts to act on psychological needs, both the author’s claim and reasoning are unequivocally valid.

Foremost, many charitable acts stand to reward the benefactor both materially and directly, hence corroborating the claim. While celebrities engaged in charity gain from enhanced reputation; NGOs get societal recognition for their work. Industrialists through corporate social responsibility benefits from tax exemptions and increased customer or client base due to goodwill development. Similarly, students participating in voluntary work gain valuable experience giving better opportunities in jobs or admissions into top institutions. Politicians find electoral rewards for their community work.

Both the author’s claim and the reason find support in the fact that self-interest is not limited for material benefits. Proving the adage ‘Helping is the basis of happiness’, researchers have scientifically proved that participation in altruism triggers the release of specific hormones responsible for the sense of happiness in humans. It is certainly for this reason that the epitome of kindness Mother Teresa found meaning in sacrificing her life. The feeling of self-worth, reward in the putative afterlife and closeness to the Almighty can also be other possible drivers. Moreover, the inherent impulse to shape the society according to one’s own principles of morality has been the interest of stalwarts like Gandhi, King Jr., etc. behind their struggles for society’s welfare. Then there are other acts, such as parental care, which are based on the expectation of reciprocation and human nature to safeguard one’s belongings and assets.

Beyond, the good feelings of pleasure and expectations, self-interest also mean seeking redemption from pain. This pain can arise from the self-guilt of not helping the poor or from the shame of being seen irresponsible in a society where altruism is a part of culture. Needless to mention that Mother Teresa, Gandhi, King Jr. were also interested to get rid of pain felt by watching the miseries of the people and evils of the society. While it can be argued that such actions emanate from empathy rather than self-interest; empathy itself implies making someone’s interest own. Therefore, pursuing that interest, and hence the resulting act, amounts to fulfilling own interest and not of others.

People argue that there is a difference in expecting benefits from a work of charity or getting it without any prior intent. For instance, when someone helps a vagabond for the first time, hardly does he know about the feel good moment that results from it. Still, the act is driven by their want to avoid the guilt of not helping the poor looking guy. Furthermore, critics of psychological egoism cite instances where a person has to act too instantaneously to have time feel any positivity or negativity about the act. The classic example is of a soldier sacrificing his life to save his comrades by jumping on a grenade. However, psychologists explain that such acts result from conditioning of behaviour inculcated in the soldier through repetitive training of warding off danger. Deviation from such behaviour causes discomfort and hence is in the self-interest of the soldier. Yet, the feeling of positivity for saving others’ life and negativity about dying comrades, recognition of martyrdom and valour, etc. cannot be ruled out as the driving self-interest of the soldier.

In the final analysis, every act done for the benefits of others reciprocates tangibly and tangibly. Even if the benefactor doesn’t intend to derive any rewards, the interest to avoid self-guilt and ignominy of not catering to someone’s needs and miseries forms the basis of a charitable act. If not due to greed or conscience, it is simply the need to follow a conditioned habit that warrants altruism in the heat of the moment.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3613.0 2235.4752809 162% => OK
No of words: 670.0 442.535393258 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39253731343 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.08766726615 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04318842128 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 357.0 215.323595506 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532835820896 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 1116.9 704.065955056 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7572855731 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.90625 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395973234588 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939330133142 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101990724897 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211909036597 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121051728478 0.0667264976115 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 198.0 100.480337079 197% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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