College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Surely after school life, many conformist strain goes deciding a career, or which path, they should follow, for their family, society, children, wife, but nonetheless not for them, career lead us to decide what jobs, passion, and sophomore need to choose wisely, while making a better choice for him, so will go with 2 understanding of my concern .
Technology, has given us numerous pool of feasibility, in which a conformist has right to decide their career, before they could legally buy a beer; through this tremendous era, conformist should decide their own path ,because it changes every time, technology era changes every time, its not in our hands to make it eminent. After all, student getting into any technology wouldn't be able to grasp, or fit in a shoe, which he can apply ubiquitous; sometimes the technology he may opt because of, trend, colleagues, people around them, therefore he never know, getting into it make more worse.Really? we want lives to be worse.Think about it.
For example, when taking computer science, as it it most emerging technology of the era, c++ was the most famous language, though if you need a job you should ought that, therefore making the requirements of the corporation fulfilled, candidates at that scenario made a lot of money, now they our just struggling with new language may be its; java, python, ruby, “the best thing about time it changes”, mavericks should decide what to choose, which would be cup of tea they could handle after years, and proliferate not only their needs, but company though.
Various technology has got our back, and people or internet may won’t lie, we got a nice suit, after all we should be able to make it happen if we just do, what we want to do not, listening the guys beside our doorsteps.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...urely after school life, many conformist strain goes deciding a career, or which ...
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...ll go with 2 understanding of my concern . Technology, has given us numerous po...
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... conformist should decide their own path ,because it changes every time, technolog...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ime, technology era changes every time, its not in our hands to make it eminent. A...
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...ry time, its not in our hands to make it eminent. After all, student getting into...
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...ll, student getting into any technology wouldnt be able to grasp, or fit in a shoe, whi...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
... people around them, therefore he never know, getting into it make more worse.Reall...
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...fore he never know, getting into it make more worse.Really? we want lives to be w...
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Suggestion: worse
...re he never know, getting into it make more worse.Really? we want lives to be worse.Think...
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... know, getting into it make more worse.Really? we want lives to be worse.Think about ...
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...etting into it make more worse.Really? we want lives to be worse.Think about it. ...
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Suggestion: Think
...worse.Really? we want lives to be worse.Think about it. For example, when taking c...
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...ample, when taking computer science, as it it most emerging technology of the era, c+...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, therefore, while, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87171052632 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60292354186 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634868421053 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.412086617 60.3974514979 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.833333333 118.986275619 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6666666667 23.4991977007 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 5.21951772744 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138540645289 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646847630469 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383056394449 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081710075843 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403795170783 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.